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Reviewer: MPJ-DK (talk · contribs) 23:56, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Z105space: - I am gong to start the GA review of this today, I usually add comments over a day or two while I look at all aspects of the GA criteria. If you have any questions etc. along the way feel free to let me know.  MPJ-DK  23:56, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • External sources - the link to indycar.com is dead according to the tool Red XN
  • Copyvio tool - No issues found Green tickY
  • Images check out with appropriate licenses etc. Green tickY
  • Meets the broad in coverage - it has what you'd expect for an article on a race, ensuring that it also covers the context of the race, not just the results Green tickY
  • Stability - Not detecting any issues on the talk page or the article history Green tickY
Lead
Background
Practice and qualifying
Race
  • "After starting fifteenth, Tracy drove aggressively and moved up into tenth position by the 20th lap." either all spelled out or not, I don't have a preference for which way you go.
    • I will keep it the way it is. 16:02, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Is there some sort of link for "Green-Flag" and what it means in racing?
    • Linked it to Racing flags#Green flag
  • "pit box to repair damage" I find the sentence "to repair damage" kinda odd, missing something?
  • "The first full course caution was race" I am confused by the word "was"?
  • "an drive-through penalty" should be "a" not "an"
  • "The move was immediately reviewed by the IndyCar chief steward and competition president Brian Barnhart and Castroneves was shown a black-flag one minute later after Barnhardt judged that he blocked Power." How about

"The move was immediately reviewed by the IndyCar chief steward and competition president Brian Barnhart, which led to Castroneves being shown a black-flag one minute later as he was deemed as having blocked Power."? the original sentence reads a little dense.

Post Race
  • Just a source review is all that remains and my review will be complete. Sorry it has taken so long, I have been suffering from bad allergies that made it hard to focus.
Source review
  • @MWright96: - I am satisfied this is a Good Aricle. Contrats