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Structure of lead paragraphs

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@S.A. Julio: I think it would be better from a practical and aesthetic view point that there be two paragraphs, instead of three, out of the content in the lead, the first stating basic information about the match and its staging, and the second describing the events and outcome of the match. As it stands now, the first two paragraphs of the lead are only two sentences long, the third three sentences. These are too short to be separate paragraphs, and I don't understand why the first two paragraphs taking about the non-play details of the match aren't together in one paragraph. The Brazil v Germany (2014 FIFA World Cup) article has an outstanding example of the structure for the lead paragraph that I initially went with before it was reverted. – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 06:40, 17 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, the first two paragraphs are now joined. S.A. Julio (talk) 06:42, 17 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]