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GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:28, 22 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 08:28, 22 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
  • WP:OVERLINK of Rita Ora under songwriter(s)
  • Why is [1] included in the infobox when those credits are sourced in the body?
  • WP:OVERLINK of all the producers, also Andrew Watt should be listed by his full name per this not being a track listing, unless his stage name is indeed Watt
  • Mention in the opening sentence that it is from her second studio album and move the single release part to the sentence after writers/producers
  • [2] should not be in the lead especially when that is already sourced in the body
  • "Nick Gale, and its producers" → "Nick Gale and its producers"
  • ""Anywhere" is a" → "It is a"
  • The above sentence feels like WP:SEAOFBLUE; unlink love song to help this
  • ""Anywhere" reached the top ten in fifteen countries," → "the song reached the top 10 in 15 countries," per MOS:NUM and you need to write out more of these than the UK in the body
  • "number two (making it Ora's eleventh UK top-ten" → "number two, becoming Ora's eleventh UK top-10" per above
  • Mention that double platinum was in the UK and write this out in the body too
  • "The music video," → "An accompanying music video," with the wikilink
  • Remove overly obvious wikilink on New York City
  • Add notable live performance(s) to the lead

Background and release

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  • Remove the comma before "Lonely Together" and mention the year it was released
  • "on which she featured on," → "which she featured on," to avoid overusage of on
  • "Ora wrote "Anywhere" with" → "Ora co-wrote "Anywhere" with"
  • "away with you."" → "away with you"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • The first sentence of the second para should be simplified to mentioning the date and that it was for pre-order and the cover art shared
  • The November release date is not sourced for the remixes

Composition

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  • Retitle to Composition and lyrics
  • Pipe breakdown to Breakdown (music) on the audio sample text
  • ""Anywhere" is a" → "Musically, "Anywhere" is a"
  • Pipe choruses to Refrain
  • The tempo sentence should be in the first para instead; maybe the one after the beat?
  • Wikilink chord progression
  • "you're going through."" → "you're going through"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "have experienced in 2017." → "had experienced in 2017."

Reception

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Critical reception

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  • Add the release year of "Super Trouper"
  • "is no higher compliment."" → "is no higher compliment"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "it's on the dancefloor."" → "it's on the dancefloor"." per above

Commercial performance

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  • "eleventh top ten single in the UK, and" → "11th top-10 single in the United Kingdom and" per MOS:NUM
  • Mention the double platinum certification and chart positions outside of the UK

Music video

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  • Wikilink music video instead of the overly obvious New York City
  • You need a source stating it had received 300 million views and do not use the constantly updating YouTube
  • Img looks good!
  • Pipe Meatpacking District to Meatpacking District, Manhattan
  • Wikilink as knee-high boots per WP:PIPE
  • "top and bottom, and a" → "top and bottom and a" per British English
  • "MTV's Sam Prance" → "MTV UK's Sam Prance" with the pipe
  • "and "a high-fashion" → "and "like a high-fashion" per the source

Live performances

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  • Wikilink BBC Radio 1 Teen Awards per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "On 5 November," → "On 5 November 2017,"
  • Rather than having the dates in brackets, why not place "on" before each one and should there really be a comma before the last performance?
  • Remove wikilink on "Your Song"
  • Should Liam Payne really be in brackets?
  • Pipe 2018 Brit Awards to Brit Awards 2018

Track listings

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Why are Alesso, Watt and Sir Nolan written at the top when you have all their credits listed out below?

Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION and split the separate years into tables
  • Pipe Plötutíóindi to Music of Iceland

Certifications

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  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks great at 21.3%!!!!
  • Aple Music → Apple Music in the title of ref 2
  • Pipe Warner/Chappell Music to Warner Chappell Music on ref 5
  • Wikilink The Line of Best Fit on ref 8
  • Remove or replace ref 14 per WP:SELFPUB
  • Fully format ref 18 as an Entertainment Tonight citation
  • Musicnotes, Inc → Musicnotes.com on ref 19
  • Add url-access subscription to ref 20
  • Remove or replace ref 25 per WP:FORBES
  • Promo News → Promonews on ref 26
  • MTV → MTV UK on refs 29, 30 and 35 piping to MTV (British and Irish TV channel) on the first instance
  • Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 33
  • Pipe Yahoo7 to Yahoo! Australia on ref 41
  • Cite YouTube as via instead on ref 44
  • WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on refs 58 and 67
  • TopHit should only be linked on ref 77, also change Tophit → TopHit on refs 86, 92, 103 and 107
  • Cite GfK Entertainment as publisher instead on ref 94, removing the other one'
  • Fix MOS:CAPS issues and cite Plötutíóindi as publisher instead on ref 97, piping to Music of Iceland
  • Remove SloTop50 from the title of ref 104
  • Why is OCC only in brackets on ref 114?

Final comments and verdict

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Comments

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Thank you for all the suggestions, I will be correcting these today. --Helptottt (talk) 11:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Your suggestions were great! Helptottt (talk) 21:57, 1 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]