Talk:Bart the Fink/GA1

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I've looked through the article and have a few brief items, they shouldn't take long to address...

Lead:

• "The title is a play on the film Barton Fink." This should be moved to the end of the last paragraph, not the first one.
• Please add a mention of the fact that Bob Newhart made a guest appearance in the episode as himself.

Plot:

• Can you add a very brief mention of Newhart's characters in there? I'm not sure what part he played in the episode so I can't really make any kind of suggestion on the wording...

— Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 14:07, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

• I will expand the article and clean it up a bit, so don't pass it yet. :) TheLeftorium 18:05, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

• Thank god for The Leftorium :P Cheers. I'^mperator 18:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

• OK, I've cleaned it up a bit now so please take another look. :) TheLeftorium 19:53, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

A good article is:

1. Well-written: Prose is good, MOS is good.
2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources are good, no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage: Covers main aspects, no unneeded detail.
4. Neutral: Yes.
5. Stable: Yes.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by images: Yes.

Nicely done, guys. — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 22:52, 8 April 2009 (UTC)