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phrasing in Aftermath section

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Nice article. The phrase "as a logistical" needs something more to be grammatical, within full sentence "An airstrip was developed at Dumpu, which would assume great importance as a logistical in the subsequent fighting in the Finisterres." I tried using revision history search to isolate the diff, but it seems I don't know how to use it. Hope this helps. --doncram 02:46, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I have fixed the wording. Hawkeye7 (talk) 05:22, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Battle of Dumpu/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:30, 13 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I will take a look at this one. Zawed (talk) 03:30, 13 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Background

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Battle

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Other stuff

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This looks to be in good order with only minor issues. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:13, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:35, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hawkeye, this looks all good. I believe that the article meets the necessary criteria so am passing as GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:29, 26 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]