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The information is relevent, so it ought to stay, but it reads like it was taken from campaingn literature, so its tone is not appropiate for Wikipedia. The original author or someone else familiar with Michigan politics ought to edit and cite the relevant bills/laws. (I wish I could, but I've been out of the state for so long that I don't know what these refer to). Petropetro (talk) 05:41, 8 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
