Talk:Damon Grant/GA1

GA Review

• It'd probably be better if had an infobox image... even if nonfree, it could be rationalised.
• Brookside should appear in italics throughout the article.
  • As do other TV shows.
• The lead could do with some mention of his reception, etc... it's not quite broad yet.
• "One of the first of the shows many teenage characters to capture the viewing public's imagination,[5][6] the role saw O'Brien catapulted to fame as a teen heart throb,[7][8][9] and his adoption of the "mullet" hairstyle proved to be in keeping with the zeitgeist of the times, and saw the character further entrenched as a cultural reference point." - split this one up... lots of ands, hard to read.
• "and added to both Brookside's fame and notoriety.[17][24][25][26][27][28][29][30]" - do we really need all those refs?

Generally reads OK, an interesting article. Nice work, giggy _(:O) 10:29, 6 June 2008 (UTC)