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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:48, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "in the United States," no need to link.
  •  Done


  • "Cumberland County Welfare Board" any link for Cumberland County?
  •  Done


  • "Massachusetts on January" comma after Mass.
  •  Done


  • "(1871-1954)" en-dash.
  •  Done


  • "Aldrich(1880-1970)," space before ( and en-dash.
  •  Done


  • "got a job as an " ->"was employed as an"
  •  Done


  • "Building. the two were" The.
  •  Done


  • "Philadelphia in 1915" the following year.
  •  Done


  • "and in 1917 her" and the next year
  •  Done


  • "and she was running" no need for "she".
  •  Done


  • "In May of 1931" May 1931.
  •  Done


  • "her son have filed for" -have.
  •  Done


  • "where she came up with a concept " where she developed a concept.
  •  Done


  • "initiated a series of contacts" what does that mean?
  •  Done


  • "who passed the concept" what does that mean?
  •  Done


  • "Leon Henderson. Henderson" repetitive.
  •  Done


  • "the Roosevelt Administration" not sure Admin needs a capital A.
  •  Done


  • "He transmitted the idea to First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt, who shared the concept with her husband" ehhh?? So, the idea was shared amongst a bunch of people. I'm not sure we need the Chinese whisper version here!
  •  Done


  • "Thence" bit archaic.
  •  Done


  • "the Works Progress Administration as" put (WPA) after this.
  •  Done


  • "spent $30,000 to build" inflate.
  •  Done


  • "town of Millville, which" overlinked.
  •  Done


  • "300 acres" convert.
  •  Done


  • "cottage style" hyphenate.
  •  Done


  • "for $7 per" etc etc, inflate.
  •  Done


  • Link "stroke".
  •  Done


That's all I have Doug, enjoy. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:06, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for review. I'll get started on resolving the issues tomorrow, after a good night's sleep.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:14, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Couldn't resist. Addressed all the issues today. Can you take another look at it. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:20, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]