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Promotional editing

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The repeated attempts to convert this page into what looks like a gallery bio or press release are very unfortunate. Carucci is a notable figure whose life and work can be portrayed in considerable detail from a large body of published sources that are suitable for an encyclopedia article. Those who have been adding the promotional text should read our policy and ways of incorporating content proposed by editors connected to the article subject. The current approach is a waste of time for all concerned and makes Carucci appear foolish. SPECIFICO talk 14:53, 18 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead sentence

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I have removed where she lives from the lead sentence per MOSBIO. This can go further into the article unless it is related to her notability. The lead sentence should also say why she is notable, it currently doesn't. Thank you, Malerooster (talk) 00:31, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I moved the work she is notable for into the opening sentence. -Lopifalko (talk) 08:11, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, thank you. --Malerooster (talk) 15:19, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]