Talk:HMS Colossus (1910)

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Review: March 9, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:17, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is in pretty good shape.

In the lead, which battle?
The displacement in the text and infobox doesn't match.
link shp in text
link Port and starboard
probably worth specifying that the secondary guns were in single mounts
After introducing BS as an abbreviation, suggest referring to 1st BS and subsequent mentions of BS
link Home Fleet at first mention
suggest linking mobilisation
link dreadnought at sixteen dreadnoughts
1900 should be 19:00
The sentence beginning During the battle has a repetition of "during the battle"
suggest and was refitted to suit her new role
suggest and she returned to Devonport where she was again listed for disposal
images are all appropriately licensed and captioned.

That's me done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:33, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for catching these mistakes. I'll wait on your responses in the Hercules review on the dreadnought and Home Fleet links before doing anything here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:40, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- I always think it is worth linking at first mention in the body, but it's not a requirement, so I'm ok either way. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:57, 9 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately license images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]