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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Pallas (1816)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:37, 5 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this one in due course. Zawed (talk) 08:37, 5 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • frigate spent time blockading the Azores being making trips to India: something off here, perhaps "being" should be "before"?
  • Oops, was meant to be "before making..."

Design

  • cites 1 and 2 are in reverse order (if that's a thing for you). Same issue with first paragraph of design section
  • Fixed
  • the cite at the end of the second to last sentence of the second paragraph is redundant since it is the same as the last cite of the paragraph
  • Good catch, this used to be a separate paragraph

Construction

  • I see there is two different dates for the reorder, but you've gone with Winfield for the infobox? I assume there is no such inconsistency with the date of being laid down?
  • I've gone with Winfield as the more modern source. The re-order is the only controversial date.
  • Complimenting should be Complementing
  • Changed

Service

  • Looks all good to me

Other stuff

  • Happy to AGF on sources given history of nominator
  • Put the 1999 Gardiner ref ahead of the 2000 one
  • Image tags all OK
  • No dupe links

That's all I have for now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:24, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Zawed: Thanks for going through this! I've replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:46, 11 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Looks all good here, I am passing as GA because I believe the article meets the necessary criteria. Zawed (talk) 08:06, 13 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]