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A fact from Hamilton Grange National Memorial appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 December 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Alexander Hamilton lived in the only house he ever owned (pictured) for just two years?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/December. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Hamilton Grange National Memorial.

Did you know nomination[edit]

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 15:01, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Hamilton Grange

... that Alexander Hamilton's house was built by the brother of a man whom Hamilton had defended in a murder trial? Source: Fox, Margalit; Robinson, George (July 20, 2003). "F.Y.I." The New York Times.
- ALT1: ... that Alexander Hamilton lived in the only house he ever owned for just two years? Source: Halpern, Janel; Appelbaum, Harvey (2013). Not the Met: Exploring the Smaller Museums of Manhattan. Pelican Publishing Company. p. 68.
- ALT2: ... that New York City's Hamilton Grange became a museum after a proposal to move it to Chicago failed? Source: "Historic Home of Alexander Hamilton to Become a Shrine". Chicago Daily Tribune. November 18, 1924. p. 2; Mongin, Alfred; Whidden, Anne D. (1980). Historic Structures Report: Hamilton Grange National Memorial (PDF) (Report). North Atlantic Historic Preservation Center. p. 81
- ALT3: ... that the number of monthly visitors to Hamilton Grange reportedly increased by 600 percent due to Hamilton? Source: "Off the stage, 'Hamilton' a hit". Newsday. June 10, 2016.
- ALT4: ... that in 2008, a lawsuit was filed over the direction in which Hamilton Grange faced? Source: Neumeister, Larry (June 15, 2008). "New direction for Hamilton house?". Chicago Tribune. p. 20
- ALT5: ... that in the 1960s, Hamilton Grange was crumbling because "too many people" were interested in its preservation? Source: Hanson, Kitty (February 20, 1967). "A House Divided Cannot Stand..." Daily News.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hannah E. Davis

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 15:18, 16 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Hamilton Grange National Memorial; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

Comment: I will be reviewing this DYK. Getting back in a bit. Darwin Naz (talk) 23:30, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Cited: Interesting:

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QPQ: Done.

Overall: Significantly expanded 3 days before nomination; original hook is interesting; plagiarism unlikely (see Copyvios report) Darwin Naz (talk) 12:00, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hamilton Grange National Memorial/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:24, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"by U.S. Founding Father Alexander Hamilton" False title, although this is perhaps more of a personal preference.
- I've lowercased this and changed it to "the U.S. founding father...". Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Link 143rd Street and 287 Convent Avenue.
- I linked 143rd Street even though that is currently a redirect. However, 287 Convent Avenue doesn't exist, and, even if it did, it would just link back here. Convent Avenue also doesn't exist but I added a redlink. Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Federal style" No hyphen?
- I've added a hyphen to the first use of this phrase "Federal-style house", as it's used as an adjective here. Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"The second floor was used as bedrooms" Sound weird, floors can't be used as bedrooms.
- I changed this to "The second-floor spaces were used as bedrooms." Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A lot of the streets, roads, and avenues in the body need links.
- I linked as many roads as I could. I do not think Hamilton Place is notable on its own, as it's a short street that runs only a few blocks, but all the other streets might be notable. Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"born in 1755–1757" I'm not sure if the en-dash is appropriate here since this isn't a range.
- I reworded this. Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"still rural, although gradually densifying" I don'y think densifying contrasts with rural.
- I removed "rural". Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"The opening of the Third Avenue Cable Railroad" When?
- According to the source, by the late 1880s. Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Most of the references look reliable and are properly formatted.
Kosner, Edward (February 25, 2011). "Book Review: Harlem | Black Gotham | Harlem Is Nowhere". Wall Street Journal.
- Is a book review, even one in the WSJ, a good source for factual claims?
  - I removed it; the next source also cites this fact perfectly. Thanks for the initial comments. Epicgenius (talk) 22:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Images are fine.
Will check the rest of the refs later. AryKun (talk) 21:18, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Spot-checked a bunch of the references and found no issues, so will be passing. AryKun (talk) 20:19, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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