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Reviewer: BeatlesLedTV (talk · contribs) 00:09, 4 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

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  • Ref 1 isn't needed in the infobox
  • Change the studio to Daft House, add a break, then put Paris, France in small font (See Homework and Discovery and you'll know what I mean
  • I think mentioning the album's six-week creation would be appropriate.
  • As opposed to "with this album," I would compare it to Homework and Discovery a little bit, kind of like how the Discovery lead compares it to Homework
  • Second paragraph looks good

Background and structure

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  • Some sentences where quotation marks are inside punctuation while others are outside. Choose one or the other for consistency
  • Not sure if the first sentence is appropriate to start a "background" section. Think it'd be better to start the third paragraph
  • Was it recorded in two weeks or six weeks? I've read multiple sources that say six weeks, which is also consistent with the recording dates "September – November" in the infobox
  • Add the year after Daft Punk's Electroma – (2006)
  • Concert tours do not go in italics (Alive 2006/2007)

Release and promotion

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  • Ref 13 and 24 are the exact same.
  • Again, un-italicize the Alive 2006/2007 tour
  • Separate chart performances into their own 'commercial performance' section. Also add the other chart positions of the album, especially the number one Top Dance/Electronic chart
  • I would add the info in the second paragraph to 'critical reception' after all the reviews; it basically discusses the response to reception before actual reception. (This whole section can be condensed to two paragraphs)
  • Add AllMusic refs for the last sentence (for Musique Vol. 1 and Alive 2007)

Critical reception

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  • Again, some sentences have quotation marks inside punctuation while others are outside. Make sure it's consistent
  • Add who won the Grammy award that year

Track listing

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  • Looks good

Personnel

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  • Make sure to cite the liner notes; section is currently unsourced
  • Link the artists if they have pages. Can also link things such as drum machines, synthesizers, and vocoders.
  • Make the items mentioned above plural, as I'm sure the duo used multiple instruments to record the album (unless the liner notes themselves state otherwise)

Remix album

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  • Add publish date to ref 40 (18 June 2014)
  • Rest looks good

Charts

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  • This section should only be reserved for the actual chart listings. Moved the sales figures to 'release and promotion'.
  • With the sales figures – "as of May 2013," seems kinda outdated. Think we could update these figures, especially since it's now February 2019?

Certifications

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  • Make sure refs have access dates

References

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  • See the toolbox. There are a ton of references that are green, blue, and there are currently three dead links. These all gotta be fixed.
  • I would archive many of these refs, especially ones that are websites
  • Change Pitchfork Media to Pitchfork (multiple refs)
  • Ref 57 – why does it say "HUman after all"
  • Make sure all refs have last name, first name; some have first last

Final comments

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  • @BeatlesLedTV: Thanks for stepping in and reviewing this article so shortly after its nomination. I have managed to fix most of the issues you found; however, there don't seem to be any publicly-available sales figures for Human After All beyond 2013. (I encountered an edit conflict when saving, and I may have reverted other user's edits; I apologize and have attempted to remerge.) Philroc (c) 16:11, 5 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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