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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:JDS Akishio/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:48, 4 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take this for review. Parsecboy (talk) 20:48, 4 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • It doesn't make sense, structurally, to talk about construction, then the design, then the narrative of the boat's career. It's to combine the narrative elements and leave the technical stuff by itself.

 Done

 Done

@Iazyges: - it's been a couple of weeks - have you lost track of this? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Parsecboy: yeah I forgot about this; I'll try to work on it later today if I can. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:37, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds good, there's no rush. Parsecboy (talk) 12:54, 22 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Parsecboy: I believe I have done everything. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:03, 25 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
The Logan & Reeves book is missing from the references section, and the seaforces link is still there. Parsecboy (talk) 10:23, 26 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Parsecboy: Fixed now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:19, 26 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Iazyges: - one last thing I didn't notice before - the intro doesn't mention the fact that she's preserved as a museum ship - could you add a line to that effect? I think that's the last thing I'd like to see. Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 29 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Parsecboy: Done. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:35, 29 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Now passed. Good job on the article. Parsecboy (talk) 16:45, 29 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]