Talk:Leleiohoku II/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, both of whom were politicians in later life suggest:

  Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, who both became politicians later in their lives.

• American and British troops were landed with the permission of the Hawaiian government, and the rioters were arrested. may want to mention the source of these troops (presumably a nearby fort).

• @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:32, 23 August 2018 (UTC)

  As a side note, would you consider reviewing my FAC nom Tetricus I? Cheers. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:35, 23 August 2018 (UTC)