Talk:Logan Drake/GA1
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Nominator: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 18:21, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Mertbiol (talk · contribs) 13:58, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
I will take on this review. The prose is very clear, but I have a few queries on some of the sources. Mertbiol (talk) 13:58, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
Prose
[edit]- I have made a couple of minor changes.
- In general, the prose is very clear.
Sources
[edit]- [10] does not support "After one more game and a 10.32 ERA in his five appearances".
- [13] does not support "He was released in May [from Wichita Falls]".
- [13] does not support "starting with Macon" – it only says that Burke was interested in acquiring him.
- [14] does not support "He pitched for the team for two months" – it only says that Drake came to Maxon from the Knoxville team several weeks ago.
- [18] does not mention Drake – so can’t be used to support "his final professional appearance".
- I have checked references [1], [2], [3], [4], [6], [11], [15], [16], [19], [20] and have found no problems.
Copyvio
[edit]- Earwig gives a score of 4.8%. I have not detected any instances of close paraphrasing or copying from the sources.
- Article is stable.
Image
[edit]- Image is appropriately licensed.
Placing review on hold
[edit]With just a few queries on the sources, I will put the review on hold. Mertbiol (talk) 13:58, 25 October 2024 (UTC)