Talk:Lumped parameter model for the cardiovascular system

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Review

The article is well-written and easy to read. Furthermore, the argument spreads greatly in the research community. Finally, some issues are present with the first and second references that I need help managing (probably due to a previous revision). I would ask the author to fix them. Isabella Poles (talk) 14:24, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review, I fixed the problem with the references. Attonio (talk) 14:37, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Many congratulations for the article. Maybe i missed it, but just wanted to suggest to integrate in the model the coronary circulation which is often neglected. 94MC94 (talk) 14:42, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, in the problem presented in the wiki article I have just considered an example, in scientific literature there are examples of models that integrate also the coronary circulation. Attonio (talk) 14:59, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Observations and suggestions for improvements

The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2023.

Suggestions: - Title: Lumped parameter cardiovascular model -> Lumped parameter model for the cardiovascular system

- it allows to study the changes in blood pressures or fluxes throughout the cardiovascular system -> it allows to study the changes in blood pressures and flow rates throughout the cardiovascular system

- used to describe the hemodynamics of the cardiovascular system -> used to describe the hemodynamics in a compartment of the cardiovascular system

- I would add some standard references on the topic, i.e. N.Westerhof, F. Bosman, C.J. De Vries, A. Noordergraaf, Analog studies of the human systemic arterial tree, J. Biomech. 2 (1969) 121–143. Quarteroni A., Veneziani A., Vergara C., Geometric multiscale modeling of the cardiovascular system, between theory and practice. Comp. Meth. Appl. Mech. Eng., 302, pp. 193--252, 2016

- while the blood flux behaves like the current flowing through the circuit according to Kirchoff's laws -> while the blood flux behaves like the current flowing through the circuit according to Kirchoff's laws, under the action of the blood pressure (voltage drop)

- mitral, aorta, tricuspid and pulmonary valves, respectively -> mitral, aortic, tricuspid and pulmonary valves, respectively

- Outputs of the lumped parameter cardiovascular model: pressures, blood volumes inside the heart chambers and blood fluxes. Please specify the reference of this figure

--Aandurro (talk) 12:00, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]