Talk:Malik ibn Awf

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I'm struggling with "If the row is wasted for a day and the anther" I'm pretty sure that anther is a typo here, or there is an additional meaning for anther apart from part of a flower. But I don't know how to correct that sentence. Can anyone help? Ϣere SpielChequers 20:21, 30 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am not sure what to do about the ‘in ignorance’ section…

The ‘in ignorance’ section has many problems, for example, it inappropriately uses ‘you’, the sentence “he used to not go out to them except that he was jealous of him until he struck him” is very confusing, and from one his or him to the next, it is not clear which person they are referencing, the ‘cultured man in the pre-Islamic era’ Malik fought, or Malik himself. And it ends, ‘he often hits like the Day of Infinity.’ What is that supposed to mean? I would fix this, but I know nothing about this topic, it was just in the GOCE October 2023 backlog, and I wanted to edit it. I don’t know what would be needed to replace this text. Can someone with greater knowledge of the topic please assist?

Best regards, Shadestar474 (talk) 04:16, 16 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]