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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk · contribs) 02:09, 6 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be reviewing this! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:09, 6 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Early life

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College career

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Minor league career

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Detroit Tigers

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Tampa Bay Rays

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Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim

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Pittsburgh Pirates

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Oakland Athletics

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Atlanta Braves

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Miami Marlins

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Playing style

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  • ”he leads all active MLB pinch hitters with 40 hits and 70 total bases since 2016, and is tied for first with seven home runs” – This is from an early 2021 source. I would change to “he led all active MLB pinch hitters with 40 hits and 70 total bases from 2017 through 2020, tying for first with seven home runs”. That way, this will never need to be updated.
  • Take Mike out before Scioscia since you mentioned him earlier.
  • Also, that was manager Scioscia, not general manager Scioscia.

References

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If that looks like a lot of comments, it’s just because this is a long article. Mostly minor stuff. Nice work on a veteran! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 03:06, 6 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sanfranciscogiants17 I think I hit everything! Kncny11 (shoot) 21:45, 8 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kncny11 I think you did too! Passing; nice work! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 22:30, 8 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]