Talk:Millennium Hilton New York One UN Plaza/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Hog Farm _Talk 17:51, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:29, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Will review soon. It's unfortunate that this one has gone so long without getting a reviewer. Hog Farm _Talk 16:29, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

" it could not be taller than the Secretariat Building." - is this a reference to the United Nations Secretariat Building? If so, recommend linking
- Yes, and I have done that. Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
" The plan was controversial, and the New York City Planning Commission narrowly approved the plan in 1970" - is it worth saying why it was controversial
- I added a sentence about that. Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kevin Roche is never actually mentioned or cited in the body by name
- Oops. I've fixed this too (the sources do mention Roche). Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"For example, after a delegate requested a rare liquor that was only available in the UK," - not quite supported by the source. The source (if I was looking at the right spot) just says that it wasn't available. The source says it's a scotch, so presumably if its an accredited scotch, it's going to be made in Scotland, but that doesn't narrow it down to only being available in the UK
- Fixed - the article now says "not available in the US". Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
" "A Visit to the Millennium Hilton New York One UN Plaza". LuxeGetaways. January 8, 2018. Archived from the original on September 28, 2021. Retrieved August 11, 2022." - not sure this is RS for these purposes. A dig through some of the advertising stuff they mention suggests that some of their "reviews" may be native advertising
- I replaced this with a reference from the U.S. News & World Report, which actually covers more stuff than LuxeGetaways did (and contradicts the number of meeting rooms cited by LuxeGetaways). Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
""Millennium UN Plaza Hotel New York Launches Major Upgrade Initiative - Luxury West Tower Will Reopen in September 2012". Hospitality Net. August 11, 2022. Archived from the original on August 11, 2022. Retrieved August 11, 2022." - I believe there's a way to mark citations as press releases, do that here
- Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Looks fine other than these few concerns, placing on hold. Hog Farm _Talk 05:23, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Hog Farm: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all of these issues now. Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.