Talk:Monk's Walk School
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[edit]The "Interesting facts" section is very poorly written and does not cite any sources. If these are facts, where is the information to back it up? Also the line "It has one of the nicest Sixth Form common rooms in the Welwyn-Hatfield consortium." is totally bias and subjective. I personally think it should be removed entirely.
Other parts of this section seem rather unencyclopaedic. The colour of the uniform and the time at which school ends are irrelevant; and I feel the location of the school in Knightfield should be placed in the first paragraph of the entire article (if needed at all).
I'd appreciate some feedback on this Howie ☎ 16:22, 11 April 2008 (UTC)