Talk:Oslo Metro rolling stock/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough 48 72 02:23, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments:

The lead needs propoer bolding.
Combine the sentences "The T1000/T1300 and T2000 were built by Strømmens Værksted, with motors from Norsk Elektrisk & Brown Boveri (NEBB) and AEG, respectively. The MX3000 were built by Siemens."
Remove the last two commas in the sentence "During the late 1970s, the western suburban lines, that were part of the tramway, needed new rolling stock."
Citation needed for "The same year, the metro started operating all services through the city center, connecting the western and eastern networks."
"The T1000 were built by Strømmens Værksted and are..." should be singular.
Citation needed for "A three-car train is 54.14 meters (177 ft 7 in) long; the end cars are 18.11 meters (59 ft 5 in) long each, while the center car is 17.92 meters (58 ft 10 in) long. The cars are 3.16 meters (10 ft 4 in) wide and 3.68 meters (12.1 ft) tall. An empty three-car unit weighs 98 tonnes (96 LT; 108 ST), while it with full payload weighs 147 tonnes (145 LT; 162 ST)."
Citation needed for "Each car is equipped with four three-phase asynchronous 140-kilowatt (190 hp) motors, giving each three-car unit a power output of 1,680 kilowatts (2,250 hp)."

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough 48 72 02:23, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thanks for the review and sorry about the lack of references—I'm not quite sure how I managed to miss them. Arsenikk ^(talk) 17:27, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]