Talk:Paul McGonagle

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Confusing

Anyone else find this confusing (the bulger links go to the same page for "Whitey"):

The leadership of the Killeen Gang then devolved on James "Whitey" Bulger. He is the brother-in-law to Catherine Grieg, the fugitive girlfriend of Winter Hill Gang leader James J. Bulger.

Okay she could be girlfriend of her brother in law but I still don't get this pair of sentences. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 110.33.16.128 (talk) 07:21, 11 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

There are a lot of grammatical errors in this write up, and it is very hard to follow. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.42.247.17 (talk) 22:55, 23 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, it's just an absolute mess. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.61.172.24 (talk) 04:54, 24 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed, already at the 3rd sentence: "While in South Boston he became acquainted with Catherine's sister Margaret and the two married..." Who is Catherine?! But it serves him right - this is the penalty you get for living a life of crime - a garbled and poorly written Wikipedia entry about your life. --Metaldev (talk) 20:02, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]