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GA Review

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Reviewer: JulieSpaulding (talk) 09:25, 19 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Hunter, I'll be reviewing this article. I'll be going through the problems I spot semi-haphazardly, so bear with me...

  1. You might like to reference the plot section. If you don't want to cite the Pawnee Zoo episode itself, at least cite a show recap.
  2. In the first paragraph of the section 'Production', a weasel word appears in the phrase 'Commentators suggested...' and in the sentence before that also. Exactly who suggested that?
    • Actually, there's no reason to use that wording in this case anyway. I simply dropped the weasel words and changed it to say that the penguin marriage mirrored the real life one. — Hunter Kahn 01:08, 20 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  3. The word 'said' is used 20 times in the Reception section. I would probably vary my statements like this:
    Critic A commented that Poehler's character appeared too cheery, but Critic B viewed this as a mere statement of her individuality.
  4. Is the use of the word 'literally' in the last sentence of the 'Plot' section necessary?

I know it's nit-picky, but I'm willing to pass this article right away as soon as these issues are fixed. JulieSpaulding (talk) 10:05, 19 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    JulieSpaulding (talk) 11:56, 20 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]