Talk:Pokémon Diamond and Pearl/GA1

GA Reassessment

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This article has a few things that needs to be fixed, otherwise it will lose its good article status.

Fix the one [citation needed] tag
Development section needs to be expanded; it is too short
A lot of information is uncited:
- Most of "Connectivity to other devices"
- The "Awards" section
Remove the external links in the article's body; there is one in "Awards"
Article needs a copyedit

Please keep this page updated with the article's progress. Gary King (talk) 16:58, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed most of the cite problems, ~~except for the one with the citation needed tag. If anyone has the relevant magazine, please source the article, otherwise the sentence can be removed.~~ Also, are you sure that the development section is too short for GA standards? In any case, I shall start copyediting. Artichoker[talk] 22:24, 24 November 2008 (UTC) Found a cite. All sourcing problems have been addressed.[reply]

Some of the other Pokemon good articles, such as Pokémon_Red_and_Blue#Development and Pokémon_Ruby_and_Sapphire#Development, are longer. Ideally, of course, this should compare to a FA article, such as The_World_Ends_with_You#Development, another DS game. Gary King (talk) 22:29, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I'll try to find some development information. Artichoker[talk] 22:33, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have slightly expanded the Development section. I'll try to find some more information still. Artichoker[talk] 16:32, 26 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Any updates on this? Gary King (talk) 03:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Looks a lot better. Keeping. Gary King (talk) 23:23, 7 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]