Talk:Pretty Much Dead Already/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: --Gen. Quon (talk) 17:38, 25 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
" Rick Grimes (Andrew Lincoln) reminds him that they're guests on Hershel Greene's (Scott Wilson) property and they could not leave without Sophia Peletier (Madison Lintz)" Should change "could" to "can"
Done

"The death of Sophia Peletier is a major theme in the episode." I'm not so sure that's as much of a theme as it is a plot point. Maybe re-write this section to say "The death of Sophia Peletier is a major incident in "Pretty Much Dead Already," largely effecting the themes of the episode."
Done

Wikilink "Secrets" in the ratings section
Done

Watch for contractions: doesn't, isn't, aren't. There is quite a few in the plot section.
Done
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Are there references for who wrote, directed and guest starred in the episode?
Done
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

On hold for seven days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:05, 25 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 22:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good! I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:10, 27 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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