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Cleanup

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Need to:

  • Remove peacock terms like "legendary", "vivid", "passion" and other content that is not neutral in tone
  • Remove pointless bolding of many phrases
  • Remove non-RS sourced being used as references (I see at least one blog there)
  • Tidy up those refs that are just floating in the references section. Are these needed?
  • Add his full name and dates of birth and death

--DanielRigal (talk) 10:40, 12 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have done the first couple of paragraphs and removed the worst of the peacock stuff. The rest still needs to be cleaned up and better referenced. --DanielRigal (talk) 11:09, 12 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]