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The French explorers contributed a wealth of new information about Tasmania that remains important today. Their observations about contact with the Indigenous inhabitants – particularly those recorded in the journals of botanist Jacques Julien de Labillardiere, which were later published in France – today remain the best accounts of Tasmanian Aboriginal society prior to European settlement.

Recherché Bay was added to the Australian National Heritage List on 7 October 2005.[1]

The National Heritage List protects, commemorates and celebrates places that have outstanding Indigenous, natural or historic values of national significance. Heritage values can include the physical elements of a site as well as the stories, people or events connected to a place. Once added to the National Heritage List, a place’s outstanding national heritage values are protected under the Environment Protection and Biodiversity Conservation Act 1999.[2]

References

  1. ^ "Department of the Environment and Energy". Department of the Environment and Energy. Retrieved 2017-12-05.
  2. ^ "Department of the Environment and Energy". Department of the Environment and Energy. Retrieved 2017-12-05.

This was misplaced, in the article text. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 23:28, 12 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

no No action I'm not sure that this qualifies as a COI edit request. In any event, the proposed text above is an insufficient paraphrase of the source material.  Spintendo  ᔦᔭ  05:07, 13 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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"The French explorers contributed a wealth of new information about Tasmania that remains important today." "The French visits to the north-east peninsula of Recherche Bay were responsible for a wealth of new information about Tasmania that remains important today."[1]
"Their observations about contact with the Indigenous inhabitants – particularly those recorded in the journals of botanist Jacques Julien de Labillardiere, which were later published in France – today remain the best accounts of Tasmanian Aboriginal society prior to European settlement." "Their observations about contact with the Indigenous inhabitants – particularly those recorded in the journals of botanist Jacques Julien de Labillardiere, which were later published in France – today remain the best accounts of Tasmanian Aboriginal society prior to European settlement."[1]

References

  1. ^ a b "National Heritage Places - Recherche Bay (North East Peninsula) Area". Department of the Environment and Energy. Commonwealth of Australia.