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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • The short description should go at the top of the article.
  • The cover's non-free use rationale looks good.
  • Add a serial comma between "pop, country and rock".
  • Add a serial comma between "Britrock, dance-pop and dubstep".
  • "reworked on the album" → "reworked the album"
  • "dubious on the genre" → "dubious about the genre"
  • Add a serial comma between "dance-pop, dubstep and Britrock".
  • Remove the comma after "Swift's perspectives".
  • Remove the comma after "optimism".
  • Add a serial comma between "country, folk and soft rock" (both times).
  • "climatic finale" - typo?
  • "On the song, Swift sings" → "In the song, Swift sings"
  • "a relationship that is dangerous" → "a dangerous relationship"
  • Remove the comma after "fear of aging".
  • "On "Holy Ground", Swift reminisces" → "In "Holy Ground", Swift reminisces"
  • "from third-person perspective" → "from a third-person perspective"
  • "on digital and physical formats" → "in digital and physical formats"
  • Add a serial comma between "Keds, Wal-Mart and Papa John's".
  • "review published 2019" → "review published in 2019"
  • Remove the comma after 69 Love Songs.
  • Remove the comma after "sales of 2012".
  • Add a hyphen between "pop inspired".
  • "groundwork to the" → "groundwork for the"
  • Remove the comma after "re-recording of Red"
  • "counter measure" should be written as one word.
  • Remove the comma after "purchase of the label".
  • The second #Release_history only has one release so I would remove it.
References
I would change the link to [[Vulture (website)|Vulture]] Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:09, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "in September" is missing a website.
  • Mark sources from GQ with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark sources from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark sources from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark sources from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark sources from Time with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark sources from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:09, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for this review. Save for one question and needing to double check QWQ and CURLY, all points are completed. --TheSandDoctor Talk 05:38, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: I think I have ALLCAPS and QWQ just fine, but how do I search for curly quotes? Whenever I try copying and pasting, CTRL + F just shows all quotes on the page, which isn't extraordinarily helpful. Is there a script or something that you are aware of? --TheSandDoctor Talk 18:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Czar: Thank you for explaining how you did it in your summary. I'll keep that in mind for future! . Thank you for reviewing this, Some Dude From North Carolina! --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:39, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Not that far. I would support for FA if nominated. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:45, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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