Jump to content

Talk:Umbrella (song)

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Good articleUmbrella (song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
November 24, 2008Good article nomineeNot listed
December 24, 2008Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs· FENS · JSTOR · TWL

Last paragraph of "Background and development" makes no sense

[edit]

I can't fix it because I have no clue what it's trying to say. InspectorMendel (talk) 12:47, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concur. The paragraph is an incoherent mess. In my experience, when a paragraph with apparently proper sources is that incomprehensible, either the writer doesn't know how to write, or if you trace back, it used to make sense and then it was heavily vandalized and no one caught it. But I don't have the time or interest to figure out which scenario is true right now. --Coolcaesar (talk) 22:21, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]