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Contested deletion

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This page is not unambiguously promotional, because it is intended to be a basic overview/brief info about a government commission. The page does not solicit viewers for donations, or support of any kind. If there is any language that is ambiguous/cause for concern, please tell me how I can edit that so it is not an issue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ww1cc (talkcontribs)

@Ww1cc: I'm glad to see that the article's promotional content is gone. However, there are still many things wrong with the article:

Please address these issues, and this article may or may not be worthy of inclusion. If you have any additional comments, please feel free to respond. HeatIsCool 00:25, 26 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I have begun making changes per your feedback. Am I still missing anything/need to address any issues? Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ww1cc (talkcontribs) 16:48, 26 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Recent changes

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I recently made some changes that were seen as "non-constructive" as posted on my talk page. The changes were being added gradually and I was not done with the article by the time it was reverted. I cleaned up content changing clusters of texts that the commissioner section appeared as and creating them into a box chart, adding a appointed by section, with the names of notable figures and organizations the appointed them. I also did other clean up work to make the page more readable and added content. I'm hoping that the revert was a mistake. Thelosthistorian (talk) 14:53, 20 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]