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Moved this here:

Copyright (c) 2006 Al Hoskins

Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.2
or any later version published by the Free Software Foundation;
with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts.
A copy of the license is included in the section entitled "GNU
Free Documentation License".

I'm not sure what we do about these.--Rayc 01:02, 6 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This article reads like an advertisement from the company itself. NPOV?Bobthelawnguy (talk) 19:17, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Van Dyne Crotty/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.

This article seems more like a family story or advertisement than a factual article. In the Growth section the lines about the inventions from the area have nothing to do with the company in question. The division section seems more like favorable opinion than fact.Is this article really necessary? This orphan seems unimportant. Also Thanks Wikipedia- my donation is on the way.Bobthelawnguy (talk) 20:35, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Last edited at 20:35, 30 December 2008 (UTC). Substituted at 09:48, 30 April 2016 (UTC)