Template:Did you know nominations/2024 Faisal Halim Acid Attack
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by Narutolovehinata5 talk 02:22, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
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2024 Faisal Halim Acid Attack
- ... that an acid attack on a football player caused the Sultan of Selangor to be upset after the MFL tried to fine the club RM100,000 after they withdrew from the Piala Sumbangsih due to the attack?
- Reviewed:
KjjjKjjj (talk) 10:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC).
Reviewing... Thebiguglyalien (talk) 06:29, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
DYK was nominated the day of creation- While the article is not long enough to be very informative, it does meet the DYK minimum.
- The sources appear to be generally reliable newspapers, including the ones that support the hook.
The article plagiarizes from multiple sources.- The article is not presentable. It needs significant copyediting and consists entirely of short one or two sentence paragraphs spread across several sections.
- The hook is very hard to read and doesn't make much sense, and the fact that someone was upset is not terribly interesting.
KjjjKjjj, this article would essentially need a full rewrite before a successful DYK nomination, and it would need an entirely different hook. It's also worth noting that there are legitimate notability concerns as previously raised on the article's talk page. If I can make a suggestion, you might consider taking more care when writing articles instead of trying to create them as quickly as you can, and perhaps see if you can get someone with more experience writing in English to copyedit them before submitting them to DYK. More importantly, please don't copy wording from sources; review Wikipedia's copyright rules before doing any more editing. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 06:53, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
