Template:Did you know nominations/Graham Charlesworth

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The result was: promoted by Zanhe (talk) 05:52, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Graham Charlesworth

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~~... that Graham Charlesworth made only one century in List A cricket?~~

ALT1:~~... that Graham Charlesworth is the coach of the Oxford University cricket team?~~
Reviewed: Air India

Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:21, 17 March 2016 (UTC).

Article meets the length and age criteria. Both the hook facts are cited to reliable sources. QPQ has been done. No plagiarism detected. No POV issues. Good to Go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 10:24, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this. Frankly, I find the hooks dull. Before you tell me that I know nothing about cricket, I'm willing to promote the first hook, but I don't see the hook fact in the article. The article says that he scored one century in List A cricket, but doesn't say that it was the only one he ever made. Additionally, the URLs all look alike; could you add in the title and date of each ref? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 14:57, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
@Yoninah: I've fixed the refs (the ref filling tool I use doesn't do that website properly). As for the hook, I'm open to ideas/feedback, although as he's only notable as a cricketer, the hook is going to have to be about cricket. Would you consider the below more interesting?
ALT2:... that Graham Charlesworth has played first-class cricket in England and South Africa?

Yes, I think that's good, thanks. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Skr15081997. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 16:13, 10 April 2016 (UTC)