Template:Did you know nominations/Jacoba Atlas

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 04:49, 13 September 2020 (UTC)

Jacoba Atlas

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• ... that singer Joni Mitchell gave hours of her time at home in Laurel Canyon, sharing her thoughts with music critic Jacoba Atlas in 1970? Source: Whitall, Susan (2018). Joni on Joni: Interviews and Encounters with Joni Mitchell. Chicago Review Press. pp. 39–40. ISBN 9780914090441.

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Created by Binksternet (talk). Self-nominated at 05:33, 30 August 2020 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done.
• Please link the films in the Filmography section.
• You did a lot of research here, and it shows. But I was expecting something totally different after reading the hook; I thought Joni Mitchell was donating her time to a halfway house or something. If you would like to use this hook angle, please rewrite it; maybe put the bolded subject first. Alternatively, you have a lot of good detail to fashion a hook from in the article. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 15:25, 7 September 2020 (UTC)

• ALT1: ... that music critic Jacoba Atlas reviewed many concerts including a "disastrous appearance" by Joe Cocker? Atlas wrote, " Joe Cocker opened and closed at the Roxy Theatre and hopefully the talent that delighted so many people a few years back won't be thoroughly buried by this disastrous appearance."[1]
• ALT2: ... that music critic Jacoba Atlas interviewed Joni Mitchell and Jimi Hendrix at their homes in the hills above Los Angeles? Whitall book[2] and Roby book.[3]
• ALT3: ... that Jacoba Atlas and Pat Mitchell were writing partners in 1990, then ten years later they were vice president and president of PBS? This PBS ref covers the hook.

• Here are three more hooks, Yoninah... Let's see how these work. I added refs and one wikilink to the filmography, along with some other minor expansion. Binksternet (talk) 17:57, 7 September 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you. ALT1 has potential, though I don't see source verification for "many concerts"; each group of performers that she interviewed ends with a citation to the last one. I guess you could get around it by writing:
• ALT1a: ... that among rock critic Jacoba Atlas's many concert reviews was a "disastrous appearance" by Joe Cocker?
• I would also change music critic to rock critic. Yoninah (talk) 18:17, 7 September 2020 (UTC)

• Let's do it – 1a. Good stuff! Binksternet (talk) 19:00, 7 September 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you. ALT1a hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2020 (UTC)