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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:47, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

Margarete Mitscherlich-Nielsen

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  • Comment: She died on 12 June 2012, age 94.

Created/expanded by Aschmidt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 09:14, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

  • Husband added as expansion of a stub, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:18, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Date, length, neutral, sources etc. all fine. I would prefer to see a cite for each sentence or group of sentences to the default source, where no other is given, but this is not really an issue. The hook has an awkward sequence, and could be taken as saying the two co-authored both books. I suggest the simpler:

Aymatth2 (talk) 19:20, 1 July 2012 (UTC)