Template:Did you know nominations/Risa Tsumugi
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 20:53, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
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Risa Tsumugi
- ... that when Risa Tsumugi was hired to be the disc jockey and rapper for the band Raise A Suilen, she had no prior disc jockeying or rapping experience? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jesu, meine Freude, BWV 227
- Comment: Waiting for ZappaOMatic to suggest additional hook suggestions as well
Created by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) and ZappaOMatic (talk). Nominated by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) at 23:35, 15 April 2021 (UTC).
- Forgot to get around to chipping in my suggestions, whoops. Personally, I'm in favor of the original hook but to throw out an alternative: Zappa⚡Matic 22:28, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Risa Tsumugi was a law student prior to becoming a voice actress? Source: Da Vinci News
Article is new and was nominated within 7 days of creation. Prose is over 1500 characters. Article is written in a neutral tone and I found no copyright errors. Some sources in the article are primary and are better replaced with secondary sources but it is not a concern at this time. In the article, I would recommend changing "stage" to "Theatre" as "stage" as a wasei-eigo term for such events. lullabying (talk) 08:25, 27 April 2021 (UTC)- Forgot to mention this, but I prefer ZappaOMatic's hook. lullabying (talk) 18:09, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Done with the stage/theatre thing. Are there any remaining issues? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:38, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Several roles are not sourced and some of the titles listed in the filmography do not follow MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media, such as tildes and inclusion of special characters like stars. lullabying (talk) 01:05, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- There are only two roles mentioned in the Filmography section that don't have footnotes, and both already are referenced elsewhere in the article. I'm not really sure what are these "several roles". As for the titles thing, I don't see any titles with stars in them, though I did see some that used dashes instead of colons, which should be easy to fix. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:11, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: D4DJ Groovy Mix and BanG Dream! Girls Band Party! are not sourced in the Filmography section under "Video games." If they're already in the paragraphs, make sure you also source them in the tables as well. Per MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media, Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight -Re LIVE- should be Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight: Re Live; Shōjo☆Conte All Starlight should be Shōjo Conte All Starlight, and BanG Dream! Girls Band Party! ☆ Pico ~Ohmori~ should be BanG Dream! Girls Band Party! Pico: Ohmori. lullabying (talk) 02:33, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- @Lullabying: All the above concerns have been addressed, including the sourcing. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:47, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Sorry for being a bit picky, but Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight: Re LIVE should be Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight: Re Live as previously stated due to MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media and MOS:ALLCAPS, unless "Live" is supposed to be an acronym of some sort. Once that gets fixed, I see no other issues. lullabying (talk) 04:55, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
Done Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:18, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
Good to go. lullabying (talk) 03:55, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Sorry for being a bit picky, but Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight: Re LIVE should be Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight: Re Live as previously stated due to MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media and MOS:ALLCAPS, unless "Live" is supposed to be an acronym of some sort. Once that gets fixed, I see no other issues. lullabying (talk) 04:55, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Lullabying: All the above concerns have been addressed, including the sourcing. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:47, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: D4DJ Groovy Mix and BanG Dream! Girls Band Party! are not sourced in the Filmography section under "Video games." If they're already in the paragraphs, make sure you also source them in the tables as well. Per MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media, Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight -Re LIVE- should be Shōjo Kageki Revue Starlight: Re Live; Shōjo☆Conte All Starlight should be Shōjo Conte All Starlight, and BanG Dream! Girls Band Party! ☆ Pico ~Ohmori~ should be BanG Dream! Girls Band Party! Pico: Ohmori. lullabying (talk) 02:33, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- There are only two roles mentioned in the Filmography section that don't have footnotes, and both already are referenced elsewhere in the article. I'm not really sure what are these "several roles". As for the titles thing, I don't see any titles with stars in them, though I did see some that used dashes instead of colons, which should be easy to fix. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:11, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Several roles are not sourced and some of the titles listed in the filmography do not follow MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media, such as tildes and inclusion of special characters like stars. lullabying (talk) 01:05, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- Done with the stage/theatre thing. Are there any remaining issues? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:38, 29 April 2021 (UTC)
- Forgot to get around to chipping in my suggestions, whoops. Personally, I'm in favor of the original hook but to throw out an alternative: Zappa⚡Matic 22:28, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
