Template:Did you know nominations/Southern Girls

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 07:23, 9 June 2012 (UTC)

Southern Girls

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... that Cheap Trick's song "Southern Girls" is about girls in southern Canada, but the title was changed because writer Rick Nielsen didn't like the sound of the phrase "Southern Canadian Girls"?

Reviewed: Sympathy

Created/expanded by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 03:26, 26 May 2012 (UTC)

Article started the day before it was nominated, and is 3514b
Article is neutral
Citations are inline, and refs seem up to snuff

I know allmusic has been considered RS, and there are books and newspaper articles

AGF on offline refs (which refs the hook)
Content matches refs for all others
Nominator has QPQ
Hook is about 193 chars, and seems to be most interesting bit about the song
Hook does not infringe BLP

Questions / Issues

Ref 1 for allmusic gives me a 404 error. That needs fixing
I would like to see refs in the infobox, as some of that material isn't elsewhere in the article

Chris857 (talk) 03:09, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed the issues. Rlendog (talk) 13:36, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

One last thing before I pass this. "Bun E. Carlos' drumming on the song has come in for praise from critics..." sounds odd to me. If it remains accurate, I suggest "Bun E. Carlos' drumming on the song has been praised by critics..." Chris857 (talk) 17:26, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

I agree. I used your wording. Rlendog (talk) 17:31, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Pass, AGF on offline sources. Chris857 (talk) 17:32, 7 June 2012 (UTC)