User:TrojanNation27

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I play baseball at Everett Community College. Currently majoring in Criminal Justice so that after I'm done playing baseball I can become a police officer.

Article Critique

I visited the page Boeing Commercial Airplanes on Wikipedia, and found three aspects worth commenting on: Global Emphasis, Citations and Summary of the article.

I noticed that in the article they talked about the main head quarters being in Renton, Washington. They never stated there two main facilities in Washington since they are based from that state which are Everett and Seattle. They could have done a better job of just adding that little piece in there that way other users would know that there are two places there which they operate and build Boeing Air Crafts. Also they could have added that in one of there plants in Everett they set the record for the biggest/ largest building in the world. That is a attention giver presenting about Boeing.

There are some facts given that are not backed up with a valuable citation. For example "with more than a dozen engineering, manufacturing, and assembly facilities located throughout the U.S. and internationally". That does not have a good source to back up what they just said. They could have used a page to cite that led to one of there facilities in another state to show they have them across the U.S.

Overall I'd rate this page as an okay. They could have done better with citations because there weren’t that many reliable sources. Adding more links would have helped. Also they could have done a better job of making the page stand out more with adding some cool facts about the Boeing Airplanes, just to get that attention out there so people find it more interesting to read because it was not exciting to read.

Global Emphasis, Citations and Summary are the three aspects i used when commenting on the page i visited on Wikipedia called Boeing Commercial Airplanes.