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Top 5 Articles

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  1. Ancient music
  2. Viral phenomenon
  3. Bulletproofing
  4. Space food
  5. Nike sweatshops


Magic 8-Ball

  • The origin is good, but the history of the toy stops at 1940, more history and context provided will give users a better sense of where the Magic 8-Ball came from
  • The chart that gives the possible answers could be updated to read a little easier
  • There should be a section on who manufactures the balls today and links to those respective companies through Wikipedia
  • Some of the popular culture references are a bit outdated, updating this with current popular culture references will mean more to the audience


Nike sweatshops

  • Text could be condensed as there are a lot of long blocks of text with a lot of information
  • More pictures should be included (and make the current ones bigger)
  • Break up the contents to include sub-contents which would make the page easier to read
  • Add a little more information to the lead so the audience gets a sense for what the article contains