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Your submission at Articles for creation: Rocket (band) (October 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Rocket (band) may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 20:09, 21 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 76.94.82.185! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 20:09, 21 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I included several reliable, theirs party sources when creating this article and these sources have nothing to do with the artist/band that the article is about. Please advise and explain why these sources I included are not being considered here. I can re arrange the article in regards to how it’s written and make sure it’s more of a neutral point of view as requested, however, the sources I’ve included in the article are independent, reliable, third party sources. Thank you. 76.94.82.185 (talk) 21:46, 21 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rocket (band) (October 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curb Safe Charmer was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Quotes need to be properly attributed. Promotional tone needs to be addressed. Please use inline citations so we can be clear where statements can be verified.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Rocket (band) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Rocket (band), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 20:13, 21 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I included several reliable, theirs party sources when creating this article and these sources have nothing to do with the artist/band that the article is about. Please advise and explain why these sources I included are not being considered here. I can re arrange the article in regards to how it’s written and make sure it’s more of a neutral point of view as requested, however, the sources I’ve included in the article are independent, reliable, third party sources. Thank you. 76.94.82.185 (talk) 21:46, 21 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to the submission and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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76.94.82.185 (talk) 21:41, 21 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I included several reliable, theirs party sources when creating this article and these sources have nothing to do with the artist/band that the article is about. Please advise and explain why these sources I included are not being considered here. I can re arrange the article in regards to how it’s written and make sure it’s more of a neutral point of view as requested, however, the sources I’ve included in the article are independent, reliable, third party sources. Thank you.

I have just replied to your comment at WP:AFCHELP. Captain Eek ^{Edits Ho Cap'n!}⚓ 06:32, 22 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

October 2019

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Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to the submission and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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76.94.82.185 (talk) 05:50, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

The draft page “Rocket” has been improved and several third party, reliable and independent references, as well as inline citations have been added to the page as requested previously and the page has been re-submitted for review. Thanks 🙏🏻 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.94.82.185 (talk) 05:50, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Rocket (band) still has no properly-formatted inline citations. You need to read Help:Referencing for beginners. --David Biddulph (talk) 06:24, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rocket (band) (October 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by PCock was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The text is still highly promotional in tone and full of subjective WP:PEACOCK wording. In addition, I don't think the references represent the kind of significant independent sources that establish sufficient notability to be included in Wikipedia (see WP:BAND).

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Rocket (band) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Rocket (band), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Peacock (talk) 10:58, 27 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your help desk question

You have a response.— Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 20:10, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rocket (Los Angeles band) (December 15)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Robert McClenon was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: This draft has been repeatedly resubmitted but continues to be written promotionally, without specifying clearly which of the musical notability criteria is met.

Do not resubmit this draft without first consulting with other experienced editors at the Teahouse. If this draft is resubmitted in its current form, or without discussion, it may be nominated for deletion.

Robert McClenon (talk) 19:48, 15 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Hillbilly Golf concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Hillbilly Golf, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:31, 29 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Anushka Jagtiani

Hello, 76.94.82.185. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Anushka Jagtiani".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! JMHamo (talk) 08:22, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Hillbilly Golf

Hello, 76.94.82.185. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Hillbilly Golf".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 17:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Rocket (Los Angeles band) concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Rocket (Los Angeles band), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:25, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Rocket (Los Angeles band)

Hello, 76.94.82.185. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Rocket".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 16:24, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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