User talk:Broman096/sandbox

Peer Review Suggestions

Hey Brianna, I just read over your and think you introduced the language very well. I only made two small formatting changes, besides that I only have a few suggestions and questions that could help you gather more information for your article. I removed the comment "It is considered to be a rude and inferior language to Korean" since it sounded negative and opinionated towards the language, I believe your article sounds better without it unless you want to add it back and include a citation to this statement. I replaced the word "Since" that appeared at the beginning of one of your sentences since it is a subordinating conjunction. A main clause should come before a subordinating conjunction followed by subordinating clause. I listed a few bullet points suggestions and questions that could benefit your article.

•Add wiki links to the location of the language Jeju Island, South Korea and to the word Korean •Cite statements like "Many Jejueo speakers are fluent in..." •The sentence that started with "Many studies have been conducted to capture standard..." is something I would mention in the history section of your article since it pertains to its independence as its own language

Overall I enjoyed reading your lead and wish you luck with future edits to your article CarlosVilles (talk) 08:05, 7 April 2017 (UTC)