User talk:Chocolate2206
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Chocolate2206, you are invited to the Teahouse!
[edit]Hi Chocolate2206! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. We hope to see you there!
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great start
[edit]Great start on the article! AugusteBlanqui (talk) 09:10, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]This is a great start. Suggestions:
- The background section needs to edited for clarity. Describe first what "Open Door" was providing as a service, then go into the detail.
- The text of the infobox is easy to change using 'edit source' rather than the visual editor.
- Be clear that there was a High Court judgement first which was upheld by the Supreme Court.
- Edit for clarity and to remove redundancy.
- Replace "Production" with "Protection" where appropriate!
- More is needed on the European Court of Justice ruling. Did this annul the Supreme Court ruling?
- AugusteBlanqui (talk) 14:27, 22 July 2017 (UTC)