User talk:GabbyXdance4life

June 2015

Hello, I'm Bonadea. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to David Hasselhoff seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. bonadea contributions talk 20:22, 23 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to David Hasselhoff. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. "hit musical", "achieved remarkable success", "iconic" (a couple of times), "world-renowned series" etc is not neutral or factual phrasings - please avoid any such wordings. Thanks! --bonadea contributions talk 20:40, 23 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, and thanks for your message! Yes, if you make sure to write in an impartial manner, the factual information you included, and the sources, can be added. Cheers, --bonadea contributions talk 10:13, 24 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! That was a great addition to the article - good job! --bonadea contributions talk 14:37, 24 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]