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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pierre de Saint Roman (October 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AlphaBetaGamma was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

WP:WTW

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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 01:29, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AlphaBetaGamma Hello ABG, thanks for taking the time to review this article. It was intended to work as an English translation of the original page written in French, using the same wordings. I was not aware that the tone was not neutral enough. Should I try to adjust the text and delete/ adjust some superlatives ? Grégoire Corty (talk) 05:20, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, please be BOLD and make that change :) ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:30, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello ABG, thanks again for taking the time to review this article. I have amended the text to make it more neutral. How does it work, do you need to review it again, or should I submit it again ? Grégoire Corty (talk) 22:17, 23 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Grégoire Corty! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 01:29, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]