User talk:Jwil224/Digital Allen's Test
Feedback from Campus Ambassador
[edit]A lot of my feedback from your other article still stands. These are a few additions.
- In your history section, you reference a website that I don't think meets reliability guidelines. Do you think you could do a bit more research into the history of the test and provide us with a more reliable source?
- For your external links, remove the quotations and add a pipe character following the URL, and a description. Like this: [www.youtube.com|YouTube, and online video website]
Dylanstaley (talk) 16:25, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
Feedback
[edit]Jared, once again, great job! I can really see where you're taking the feedback you've received and implementing it. The only suggestion I have is to take a look at the "What not to link" article. Generally, you don't link common English words, and you only link on the first reference. For example, only the first mention of blood should be linked. However, if you're unsure of whether something should or shouldn't be linked, go ahead and leave it linked, and another editor will review the article when we go live pretty soon.
Once again, fantastic job Jared! Dylanstaley (talk) 15:04, 6 April 2011 (UTC)