User talk:Kyoho

Welcome!

Hello, Kyoho, and welcome to Wikipedia. Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few good links for newcomers:

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Since I don't patrol recent changes, and I'm not a member of the Welcoming committee, I don't usually get the opportunity of welcoming new editors to the Wikipedia. If you have an comments or questions, please leave a message on my Talk page. If you are interested in topics on Japan, you may be interested in the Japanese Wikipedians' notice board. I'm mostly interested in Japanese poetry and I did about fair number of the edits on the kigo article. BlankVerse ∅ 13:03, 28 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice! I wonder if it's better now? Kyoho (talk) 01:32, 17 December 2018 (UTC)Cheryl[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tagami Kikusha (November 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Rankersbo was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Rankersbo (talk) 11:56, 3 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Kyoho, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Rankersbo (talk) 11:56, 3 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tagami Kikusha has been accepted

Tagami Kikusha, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 03:23, 15 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Taylor Turner (December 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft lacks a properly formatted lede sentence, of a form such as "William Taylor Turner was an American diplomat...". Without a lede sentence, it is difficult to assess for general notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Thank you! I hope it is better now. Kyoho (talk) 19:01, 16 December 2018 (UTC)Cheryl[reply]

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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:29, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I've expanded the lead a bit further. Please feel free to tinker with it if you wish! I might have been close to accepting it in its earlier form but the previous reviewer is very experienced and I would trust their judgement on the issue. A lead should briefly summarise the major points of the article and more detail and references contained within the 'body'. Cheers. Eagleash (talk) 21:01, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Also, it would be beneficial if the page contained the date of death, which should be the opening statement in the lead (after the Japanese translation in the form {1900–XXXX) (with an endash) with the place of birth shown separately. Eagleash (talk) 21:07, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Taylor Turner (December 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Catrìona was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Per Robert McClenon, the subject's references do not qualify it for notability and no new references have been added.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Catrìona (talk) 09:41, 18 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Den Sutejo

Hello, Kyoho. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:Den Sutejo.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. — JJMC89 (T·C) 02:19, 28 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]