User talk:MUpsych
Hello Murat
[edit]Edit away my guy. Sdb27 (talk) 16:19, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:44, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review-Molly Peterson
[edit]Overall, this seems very informative and well explained. I like that each example is backed up with how their characteristics point to narcissistic behavior. You have wide range of topics to cover pop culture and you have the perfect amount of description per character, I think its enough to prove that they are narcissists.
Formatting: - I would recommend putting the "Narcissism in popular culture" before the content box, so that the article opens up with the main topic of the page. -Maybe add a picture or two of actors from their film/tv show -The last bullet point you have on the whole page, "There is a forum dedicated to narcissists..." I dont think that has anything to do with Media and is more of how to classify a Narcissist and I think you should move that up to your top where you may or may not have "background" information
Adding Info -Would it be too much to put in a quick definition of narcissism and what qualities make up a narcissistic personality just to refresh and somewhat back up all of your character evidence. -Im assuming the ones you have NEED EXPANDING written next to you will add the wikilink to all of those actors if there is one -If you could find one more example of a video game and comic with a narcissistic character I think that would make the section just a little stronger to have more than one bullet point. Peterson.moll (talk) 14:31, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Peer Edit - From Rebecca
[edit]• I would suggest adding a brief definition of narcissism in your opening paragraph.
• Are you able to use this picture of Donald Trump? Also, the source leads to the page "IEatAss666"
• The formatting you've done for your page is really well done. It's well organized and easy to read.
• There could be more evidence to show that Jennifer Lopez is a narcissist besides the one statement of, "A sense of entitlement is a very common narcissistic trait."
• "Real Life" title seems really casual. You could change it to "Everyday Life" or not have a title heading for the section.
• I would aim to have at least three examples for each header. "Video games" and "Comics" specifically are sections that could use expansion.
Iamastudent (talk) 14:40, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
The article you created (Narcissism in popular culture)
[edit]I see that you moved the article you created from your userspace to the mainspace. The article you created still needs some work before it should be placed on the mainspace, so I will now move it back to your userspace. Please contact me on my talk page when you are ready to turn this into a draft to be reviewed at AfC. I suggest you take a look at WP:NPOV and WP:NOESSAY. I have moved the page to User:MUpsych/Narcissism in popular culture Thank you! — Music1201 talk 03:45, 9 April 2016 (UTC)