User talk:Vatslaw

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheSandDoctor was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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TheSandDoctor (talk) 14:33, 16 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Vatslaw, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! TheSandDoctor (talk) 14:33, 16 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from http://news.rediff.com/slide-show/2010/aug/24/slide-show-1-why-terrorists-love-the-blackberry.htm , http://www.ohchr.org/EN/Issues/Pages/WhatareHumanRights.aspx https://www.ihrfg.org/human-rights-funding/about-human-rights http://www.risemalawi.org/rights.html https://citizenjusticenetwork.org/2016/10/19/human-rights-in-south-africa-are-protected-under-the-constitution-on-musina-fms-areaganeng-show-cjn-slot/ http://www.opa.sa.gov.au/rights/human_rights_and_people_with_mental_incapacity and several others. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly exists under a compatible licence and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

User:Vatslaw/sandbox may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 15:19, 16 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]