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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 20:11, 11 October 2008 [1].
List of awards and nominations received by Justice[edit]
Gary King (talk) 05:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]Do the D.A.N.C.E
Stick to the B.E.A.T
Just easy as A.B.C
— Justice, "D.A.N.C.E."
Comments - sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:30, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments - you couldn't have waited? Not even a week old.
- Lead
- Justice is a French Grammy Award-nominated electronic music duo consisting of Gaspard Augé and Xavier de Rosnay.[1] The band is known for incorporating a strong rock influence into their music and image. - so is it a band or a duo? You use both, which is it?
- Their debut album † was released in June 2007 to critical acclaim,[5][6] coming in at number 15 on Pitchfork's "Top 50 Albums of 2007"[7] and number 18 on Blender's "25 Best Albums of 2007" list.[8 - coming in? How about ranking number 15 on ..etc.
- Tables look okay.
--SRX 14:48, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- All done. They are a duo AND a band. Gary King (talk) 14:53, 26 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment needs copyediting. For example, They are the most successful group on Ed Banger Records, and are managed by the label's head, Pedro Winter. Too much use of passive voice in the introductory paragraphs and somewhat confusing jargon/syntax. DurovaCharge! 20:59, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- That could be broken up into two sentences but I think it makes sense to keep it as one; the first clause should probably stay passive at the very least, and so the second is passive as well to follow suit. Gary King (talk) 21:29, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
"The duo has found success"-->The duo has been successful...Feist needs to be disambiguated.I don't think that Justice needs to be linked in the MTV Europe Music Awards table.
Dabomb87 (talk) 00:59, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- All done. I'm going to leave the Justice link; normally I link items at least once in the body, ignoring whether or not they were linked in the lead. Gary King (talk) 01:11, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support All issues seem to have been resolved, and the article looks good. iMatthew (talk) 23:01, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.